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Georgia on My Mind

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Image size
4000x3000px 10.2 MB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-G1
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
21 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 15, 2009, 12:18:52 AM
Mature
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I love how you retouched the body. However the only thing is that at least on this resolution you can see the walls and background a lot grainier than the subject. Also the subject is perfect up until the left ankle area. There is a small area that might need a little bit more smoothing.

If those two things are smoothed a bit more, the shot will be perfect.

The other thing, but that is more of a preference of mine. Would be to work a bit on the colors in the face. The body for example as a nice contrast of colors almost everywhere except in the face. Don't know if it was because of the lighting. I don't a soft overlay to create a little bit of highlight in color on the forehead or on the cheek. I don't know, something to give it the same tones you see on the breasts, ribs, hips, etc.

Love this picture. I would praise the contrast of the blue carpet, her color, and the shoes!