I like the model - very much so. Aesthetically she is gorgeous - the shot, however... perhaps its just me, but her slight slouch seems to put her just off center; never a good thing for an upper-body shot. Also, who knows... perhaps it was warm where you were shooting - but the slight gleam off her forehead, and arms makes me question the lighting. Shoot softer, and correct in Lightroom, or an equivalent program? Just my two cents... you have some amazing shots, and show great potential. Keep it up.
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