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:iconheaven2ll:
heaven2ll Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
Avia A.  aka  Lizzie Ryan
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:iconrpost61:
rpost61 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
:)
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:iconlongrider1952:
longrider1952 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Excellent! Beautiful capture!
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:iconroby8002:
roby8002 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
so sensual and elegant!
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:iconwolfswald12:
wolfswald12 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
I like her posing and her look. Her bellybutton is so beautiful.
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:iconriverrat323:
RiverRat323 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sexy
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:iconxepowe:
xepowe Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
aww....don't be shy...=p
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:iconlumberjack8:
Lumberjack8 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
wow hugely hot!
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:icondeloreanjoe:
deloreanjoe Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
I'm done in a flash
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:iconabdallah9:
abdallah9 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
wow
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:iconacoreslisboa:
AcoresLisboa Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Professional Photographer
Great shot. Beautiful lips and eyes!
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:iconreinhander:
Reinhander Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful shot, and awesome model...
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:iconblackunion:
blackUnion Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010   Interface Designer
viva mexico! beauty and sexy girl
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:iconboschista:
boschista Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010
Her face speaks everything.
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:iconeric58:
Eric58 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010
The photo is very nice and the girl is stunningly Beautiful!
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:iconthebvsone:
thebvsone Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Hobbyist
Sexy eyes! :censored:
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:iconfkurtz:
fKurtz Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010
great!
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:iconhelpless-romantik:
helpless-romantik Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
very nice..
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:iconzodiacmindwarp:
ZodiacMindwarp Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautifully done.
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:iconlagutin:
Lagutin Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Great shot! I would love to see more of this model
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:iconstarshine1957:
starshine1957 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
this photo needs a mature tag, Iam so sick of looking at half naked sluts
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:iconamosbeck:
amosbeck Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2010  Professional Photographer
I quite disagree. A slut is defined as: "an immoral or dissolute woman; prostitute."
If you wish not to see it, simply move on.
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:iconstarshine1957:
starshine1957 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010
those pic's should not be out in the open
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:iconamosbeck:
amosbeck Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Professional Photographer
:shrug: I just turned 15, and I find this to be a beautiful piece of artwork.
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:icongeoman88:
geoman88 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Nice boobs!so big
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:iconspider071:
spider071 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
too sexy, if its possible ;P she is gorgoeus !
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:iconcommandersmartass:
CommanderSmartass Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Porn.
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:iconsassamafracken:
sassamafracken Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice photo.

The people consistently criticizing work like this because they are ashamed of nudity should grow up. Comments like "this doesn't belong on DA" are so absurdly subjective that they show a complete lack of understanding in regards to art criticism.

Are you allowed to share an opinion? Of course. However, I would argue in return that DA is just as much about intelligent critique as great art - and your comments may be just as out of place as you claim this photo is.
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:iconiamfrancy:
IamFrancy Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
ohhhh my gosh
she s so damn sexy n beautiful in da same way !
very very hot gurl !

•○○•I Live For A Dream•○○•
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:icongabihantig:
gabihantig Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wonderful photo..i love ya:D I invite you to post your artwork there:
[link]
Thanks!I am waiting for you!
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:iconangelofshiva:
angelofshiva Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
It's been done before, do something original sexy, not basic. But it's still a nice shot ^^
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:iconshermanowney:
shermanowney Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
sexy
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:iconchicoflaco:
chicoflaco Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
what a beaut
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:iconsmokingunmp5:
SmokinGunMP5 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
Avia A. from Femjoy.
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:iconbermanator22296:
Bermanator22296 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
I swear she looks like Catalina from My Name is Earl.
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:iconsaviorofkeys:
SaviorofKeys Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010   Traditional Artist
Don't you "..." at us mister! Be ashamed.
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:iconmimuffet:
Mimuffet Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
Love her bone structure and the colour of her shirt. It's good to see a body that's normally proportioned - big breasts often come with large hips, and/or a larger rear. It's not shown that often, but it's true.
I also like the belly button bling that goes with the little studs on her shirt pocket. The image feels pulled together and pleasant. Could benefit from better lighting. I still like it, though.
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:iconteabeescus:
Teabeescus Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This seems to look more like a pin-up you'd find in a teenage male's locker than actual art.

Maybe you should try some concept/Scenery photograph instead or post this on /b/. They'd like it alot.
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:iconxx-kr-xx:
Xx-KR-xX Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student General Artist
not quite sure what you're going for with this image. it confuses me. well, she's attractive. but that's really the only good thing i can say. there's a fine line between artistic nudes and sex images. this isn't really a glamour portrait per-say. eyes lack emotion. if the eyes aren't strong enough in the image, the image is lost. try and make your models represent an emotion of sorts when posing, it'll help people connect to the image better. parted lips are highly overdone. a model can have full, luscious lips by just using lip gloss. lip gloss and parted lips together just over does it. her pushing her breasts together really isn't all that appealing either in the photo. "more cleavage" doesn't necessarily "more attractive" either. on the bright side, the contrast between the soft blue and brown is really nice. on the down side, her hair is almost the same color so she gets lost in the background. i like the hand on the neck, not so sure about the one on her face. i feel it takes away from her features. just remember that accentuating the breast and lips makes for a more "sex" based image while accentuating the limbs and eyes can make for a more artistic image. make your models look tall. she's all scrunched up. that's all i've got for now. oh, and next time please remember to put a mature filter on please. it's just a respect thing for people who are uncomfortable with this kind of art.
that's all the critique i can think of. ignore people who just bash your photo's. insulting someone's work isn't going to help the artist any. advice helps one improve. ALSO- never be afraid to tell your model what you want them to do. guide them. don't force them though if they're uncomfortable with a situation. but you can always explain to them what you're looking for.
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:iconfatelesssacrifice:
FatelessSacrifice Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just want to say, you need better lighting.
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:icondubyavu:
dubyavu Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
Nice body angle - just a bit of a "come-hither" look but not overdone: excellent. The breasts are nice but they detract from the model's face (just not a big breast guy myself... ) and the enticement of wishing you could see further down - but, I'm guessing that that questioning is all psrt of the idea... Good shot, thank you.
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:iconziggyman:
Ziggyman Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Professional General Artist
NOt showing sometimes is better.
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:iconironicgiant:
ironicgiant Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
That tummy is so sexy.
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:icon0leth0:
0Leth0 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
boobs...
DA isn't a site for this
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:iconmusikankill:
MusiKanKill Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010   Interface Designer
Terrible photo.

Yay for porn making it on the front page.

Least this crap won't make a DD.
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:iconjohnkillinger:
JohnKillinger Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student General Artist
ok, so you stuck a shirt on her. still the same thing: a sex picture. this is still a concept short of actual photography. again i'm not criticizing nude art, i'm criticizing you. dont be another person who takes pictures of nude women and calls it art. do something different. get inspired! learn more and become great!

a wise man once said: only a fool thinks himself a master. there is always more to learn.
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:iconxaviaphoenix:
XaviaPhoenix Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
Proof that the amount of skin and tits shown in a photograph are highly proportionate to the amount of pageviews received, despite tastefulness of the image. At the very least, put a mature content filter on all such photos so that those of us who DON'T want to see it on the front page don't HAVE TO.
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:iconcatwings30:
catwings30 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Amen.
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:icontrashcanman316:
trashcanman316 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
Very nice.
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DMC-G1
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F/11.0
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100
Date Taken
Jan 7, 2010, 4:03:26 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows

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