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Music Is What Feelings Sound Like

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Description

[ cultivate your desire ]
Image size
4000x6000px 15.72 MB
Make
SONY
Model
NEX-7
Shutter Speed
1/160 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
40 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Mar 2, 2012, 4:33:04 PM
Mature
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IronPlushy's avatar
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The picture is very boring to start. I mean if you're going with nudity, the nudity should contribute to the picture but her breasts are exposed and that's that. I'm a big fan of well done nudity, but this doesn't fall into that category. The picture is kind of dark, you may have wanted to detract attention from the chair, but the low lighting gives strange rendering to reflective surfaces on the chair.
There's nothing innovative or inspired about this piece. She appears very bored, and I feel a key to making or breaking portraits is the model's expression. I mean it can set the mood better than any lighting, focus, or composition.
I feel the composition is poor. You cut off her legs, elbows, and hand. Part of her face is obscured by her knee, and the pose is absolutely boring and uninteresting.
I don't know what this has to do with music, I feel like the title may have been a mad lib.
Overall the lighting sucks, the composition is pretty bad, there is absolutely no new ground covered. The model looks bored, and the nudity serves no purpose.