For me the white background betrays this image. the power of the model would come through MUCH stronger if the background was dark, (especially with the lighting you have used). apart from that, nice pose, nice model nice lighting, nice attire. also the subject is slightly far too right for me in such a straight forward photo (no background interaction), her pose almost begs you to put her more left... or maybe thats just my taste.
Minor niggles in an otherwise professional photograph. 8/10
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